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You got 0 bombed, so I 5'd
DJ Bliss
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You Are Protected
You got 0 bombed, so I 5'd
DJ Bliss
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Actually, I got 0 bombed twice O.o so thanks
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:::::My Review:::::
Elegant man, this is a pretty elegant track
I'm not really sure what to suggest adding to it
DJ Bliss
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Thanks again, this is what I get for posting two songs right next to eachother, logically they are going to get bombed by the same people. =|
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:::::My Review:::::
Kicks man, kicks..... Your song needs a kick, hats, and a bassline
This is ok for a start, but you need to add some stuff, this just sounds like the bare bones of a song
DJ Bliss
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Yes, I do realize it lacks drums. That is mostly because it is a loop. If it had bass at one point, then the loop would seem choppy.
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:::::My Review:::::
The beat is ok... good for oldskool
Try putting some enthusiasm and emotion in your lyrics
You sound kinda monotone
DJ Bliss
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the beat is great man....idk what your talking about but iight
terrible
eq is way off
recording sucks
no rythm
shitty lyrics
no creativity
redo the whole thing
better luck next time troll
DJ Bliss
I really home that people don't take this too seriously.
there won't be a next time :P
Perm ban from Iscribble,
and I'm too lazy to get around it.....
FINISH!!!!!!!!
Do not, I repeat do not stop making this song
Finish this shit
5/5
10/10
Future download on completed project
DJ Bliss
Ah ty man!
im working hard on this one!
:)
Yup Yup!
Ear Secks at its best eh?
Lets hear some more man
10/10
5/5
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DJ Bliss (Retired)
tyyyyy
too short
try finishing it :D
not bad, not bad at all kid
keep up the good work
DJ Bliss (Retired)
Thanks for the feedback, I'll look in to it when i have the time :) But this is something i kinda just made to have something to do, but it turned out pretty cool actually :)
Svada
Dr.Dre?
this sounds like a Dr.Dre beat
are you the master Dre?
Great job yo
DJ Bliss (Retired)
i wish i was a master but it was actually my first attempt at making a hip hop beat
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