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You got 0 bombed, so I 5'd
DJ Bliss
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You Are Protected
You got 0 bombed, so I 5'd
DJ Bliss
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Actually, I got 0 bombed twice O.o so thanks
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:::::My Review:::::
Elegant man, this is a pretty elegant track
I'm not really sure what to suggest adding to it
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Thanks again, this is what I get for posting two songs right next to eachother, logically they are going to get bombed by the same people. =|
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:::::My Review:::::
Kicks man, kicks..... Your song needs a kick, hats, and a bassline
This is ok for a start, but you need to add some stuff, this just sounds like the bare bones of a song
DJ Bliss
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Yes, I do realize it lacks drums. That is mostly because it is a loop. If it had bass at one point, then the loop would seem choppy.
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:::::My Review:::::
The beat is ok... good for oldskool
Try putting some enthusiasm and emotion in your lyrics
You sound kinda monotone
DJ Bliss
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the beat is great man....idk what your talking about but iight
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:::::My Review:::::
This is pretty tight track
I would suggest messing with the levels
You can barely hear the vocals
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you got 0 bombed so i 5'd
This loops REALLY well
and would go perfect in a flash game
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you got 0 bombed so i 5'd
this is a pretty good track
try adding a bass line and a couple synths
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5'd fpr the 0 bomb
you got 0 bombed so i 5'd
it only deserves a 3 from me
its ok but need to be longer and a bit more creative
its a perfect wip and a great start to what could be a great song :D
I am... HellSoul
Age 37, Male
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St.Louis, Mo
Joined on 5/2/09